This was great fun to write, but also a challenge. I’ve never written a novella before so being used to 90,000 plus words and having to get the whole story down in less than 20,000 instead was difficult at times – especially since this was the sort of story that could easily have been developed into a much longer one. That said, I enjoy the faster pacing that happens as a result of this because it adds a bit of urgency to the characters falling head over heels in love with each other. =)
Thank you so much for stopping by today. Below is a little excerpt from Chapter 4 which I hope you’ll enjoy. Happy Holidays everyone!
Excerpt:
“I was wondering - If I call on you tomorrow … will you receive me?” He must have seen the appalled look upon her face, for he quickly added. “Unbelievable as it may seem, I find myself enjoying your company and was hoping to further my acquaintance with you. However, I have no desire to wait in line along with a dozen other men, so if you’d rather I stay away, then I’d be much obliged if you’d say so now.”
Well, as far as forthright went, Lord Redfirn was certainly the very definition of the word. Perhaps he wasn’t as bored as she’d imagined. Warming to the easy tone of his voice, she couldn’t help but say, “A dozen? Will that really be all? Frankly, Lord Redfirn, I rather suspect they’ll be lined up all the way to Hallidan.”
He raised an eyebrow. “Not if your …” He coughed and let the words he might have spoken fade into oblivion.
“Not if my what?”
“Hmmm?”
“You were saying, not if your …” She gave him a pointed stare.
He frowned as if unsure of whether or not it would be wise to tell her what he’d been about to say. Eventually, he shrugged, lowered his head a little toward hers, and whispered, “Not if your dance card is any indication.”
Aha! So he wanted to play that game, did he? Very well then. Without as much as a moment’s hesitation, Leonora misstepped just enough to place one foot on top of his.
She was rewarded by a very loud wince along with a grimace. “You did that on purpose, you little minx.”
“Not at all,” she countered. “If you recall, I’m quite out of practice - my apologies.”
“Then perhaps it would be wise of me to keep a firmer hold on you.” And he pulled her closer - scandalously so.
Leonora had never been one to swoon, but she felt certain that now might be an appropriate time to start. She felt energized and bold, not to mention giddy from the feel of him so close to her, coupled with the scent of sandalwood that floated in the air around him. There was no question about it - he’d ruined dancing for her forever, for no other man would ever measure up.
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Thank you so much for hosting me today, Diana - your blog is gorgeous and I'm thrilled to be here!
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DeleteIt's no secret that I love this story! The tension between Connor and Lenora--their separate agendas--left me unable to walk away from the novella until I reached the end. Spectacular!
ReplyDeleteThank you for writing this wonderful story. I can't wait to read your other books, as well!
~Viv
Oh wow, thank you so much, Viv =) As you know, I loved your story too! It's been such a pleasure and honor to participate in this anthology with you, Karen, Rena and Sandra and I will look forward to reading more from all of you!
DeleteDiana this sounds delightful and I cannot imagine the pressure of purposefully writing a novella.
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DeletePleased to meet you, Sophie :)
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Pleased to meet you too, Isi - thank you for posting a comment =)
DeleteYou know I loved Connor and Leonora! I enjoyed how they came to love each other even though their goals were completely opposite. Great writing, Sophie!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sandra! I've had a blast with this anthology of ours - it's been such a wonderful experience working with you and the rest of the group. You know I loved your story as well and will be looking forward to reading more by you =)
DeleteSophie, I did detect a little EMMA in the story, and I loved that the twist was that they both were matchmakers. Also, I detected a bit of a mystery around Connor's friend, who has a few latent matchmaking tendencies, himself, and I kept wondering if he would end up with a story of his own. Great story!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rena =) I absolutely LOVED your novella! The Christmas spirit was so well portrayed I could practically smell those freshly baked buns and feel the cold air biting at my toes. Beautifully done - I look forward to reading your post tomorrow!
DeleteSuch a great story - enjoyed seeing a bit of your process for the novella, Sophie! And Diana your blog is beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Karen! I'm so proud of us all - so great to see the hard work paying off =) And I agree with you - I'm in love with Diana's blog - I could just sit and gaze at it all day!
DeleteGreat guest blog :D This anthology I could read
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Great post, and that sounds like a nice dance scene.
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I really want to read this collection of novella's I have a weakness for Mistletoe kisses.
ReplyDeleteThis book sounds fantastic. Can't wait to read it. I love anthologies. They help me find new authors.
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Thank you so much everyone - I really appreciate all of you taking the time to stop by. Hope you have a great holiday season!
Deleteoh i love Christmas short stories :))
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